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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As far as I am concerned,judgements are basically made under aborative thinking,so I consider snap judgements are unauthentic. Snap judgements are made much too fast that it lacks consideration.For instance,when a police officer needs to identify and arrest a suspect,instead of checking the known files,he decides to find the suspect by instinct,he might catch the wrong guy and let the real one run away.Also,as you are going to choose one from several courses,without considering the content of the course and what it may provide you,you choose it basing on whether it seems cool,you might end up wasting time gaining nothing. And there is a saying goes,never too soon to make a decision.So I think snap judgements can never be trusted.

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