作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
It's easy to find the fact that more and more people ignore the importance of studying chinese.We can see that form the decrease of chinese crouses in most school.Something else,students pay more attention to some subject,which is unconcerned about chinese,such as,english,french. After analying the phynomenon,we can point out some reasons for it.First,we think that we are the native,which gives us a confidence about chinese without acquired efforts.Second,some school take a relax to supervise the teaching of chinese.Above all of analysed,the bad influence caused,our first language will become stranger and stranger for us chinese.What's worse,it maybe being of a weapon of foreigner to frusrat us. For my part,I think,valuing chinese is a duty both ourseleves and education department.On one hand,we should realize the benefits of learning chinese and work hard.On the other hand,education deparment should take measures to resovle the problem and do something like allowing a law about supporting learn chinese.