2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

The Way to Success Nowadays, more and more people want to find the way to success.Everyone want to be success,which let them feel better than other people. How to be success?First,we should know about ourselves.We must know what we want to be and what we can do.Second,we should learn more in the part which you can not do well.Just as the saying goes,"It is never too old to learn".We must learn in every time. Third, just look at ourselves.It can do nothing when you thinking other people is better than you. So just think about youself.Forth,we have to ask other people what we don't do well. we can do better if we know our shortage. All in all,Rome isn't built in a day.We cann't be success just in a day.We should do more and learn more,which will let you success one day.