作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
It's easy to find the fact that more and more people ignore the importance of studying chinese.We can see that form the decrease of chinese crouses in most schools.Something else,students pay more attention to some subject,which is unconcerned about chinese,such as,english,french. After analysing the phenomenon,we can point out some reasons for it.First,we think that we are the native,which gives us a confidence about chinese without acquired efforts.Second,some school take a relax to supervise the teaching of chinese.Above all of analysed,the bad influence caused,our first language will become stranger and stranger for us chinese.What's worse,it maybe being of a weapon of foreigner to strike us. For my part,I think,valuing chinese is a duty both ourselves and education department.On one hand,we should realize the benefits of learning chinese and work hard.On the other hand,education department should take measures to resovle the problem and do something like allowing a law about supporting learn chinese.