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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22889
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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My hometown I am a country girl from Changle, Fujian. A small city just separate from Fuzhou. Changle was develop so much compare 10 years ago. First is people. People was much opener than before. When I was young, when there was different opinion by two Villegas, they were decided by fig; However since the economy was developed, people have more relationship, so now they were accept how thing work around them. Second is building. I have said, I was surprised when I first see all these buildings. At old time 5 floors is the tallest one at our village, but now 10, 12 just common. I was proud of living at 5 floor house, but now it was nothing. 3rd, I have to say transportation. In 10 years ago, people had motorcycle, bicycle, most of time, they travel by bus. Look at now, a lot of family have a car, they just drive everywhere themselves. Most of them have powered motors, so they can go places easily. I have to say, the world is different now, some are good change, some are not, but my hometown still my home.

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