作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My hometown I am a country girl from Changle, Fujian. A small city just separate from Fuzhou. Changle was develop so much compare 10 years ago. First is people. People was much opener than before. When I was young, when there was different opinion by two Villegas, they were decided by fig; However since the economy was developed, people have more relationship, so now they were accept how thing work around them. Second is building. I have said, I was surprised when I first see all these buildings. At old time 5 floors is the tallest one at our village, but now 10, 12 just common. I was proud of living at 5 floor house, but now it was nothing. 3rd, I have to say transportation. In 10 years ago, people had motorcycle, bicycle, most of time, they travel by bus. Look at now, a lot of family have a car, they just drive everywhere themselves. Most of them have powered motors, so they can go places easily. I have to say, the world is different now, some are good change, some are not, but my hometown still my home.