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My favourite sport Everyone has his own favourite sport,so do I.I am a girl ,but my favourite sport is especially,I like playing football. It comes to my heart by chance.One day,I was on my way home,and I picked a football,then I played it with my friends.At the begining,I just think it is very funny,but day by day,I find I begin to love it.Now,maybe I can't live without it.I usually train and race with my classmates. My favourite football player is Beckyham,and I dream to be a professional football player. I'll try to let my dream come true,so,come on!