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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5751
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

How to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. It's known to all that we live in a information age.So people says:"A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention."But so much information around us,its easy to be distracted by it.And there is the question,how to avoid it? First and important ,we should learn to find the useful information.We should keep our eyes open and do not confused by some complicated information.And then we should insist our own principle when we face some difficult choice. Never to say what everybody says,this would destroy our own independent idea.Last but not least,we must learn form the information not just know it.Only by this way,we can keep our step with our age,and not drop out by the time. Living in a information is good for us ,but not distracted by it is important to everyone.So keep our mind clear is most important to live in this age.

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