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1999年6月英语四级作文真题:读书要有选择还是博览群书

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:35浏览次数:7008
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Reading selectively or extensively? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.有人认为读书要有选择
  2.有人认为应当博览群书
  3.我的看法
用户的作文(系统评分44.5分
评语:

正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

we fond out that more and more poeple in reading have difference opinion. In a study,we learned that reading more less than before quesion.In someone opinion ,they think reading have a choice .Frist,the reader think some books dont't have some skills aquire.second,some books aren't attract reader.The books are steam.The other think that reading should be all kinds .First,it can improve you all ability .Such as ,reading skills、writing skills、some special skills and so on.Then ,it can acquire a lot of imformation.For example ,we can leaning about Englishi news and all formous txt. In my opinon ,there are opinion is good.But I like reading all kinds books than reading have a choice.Now ,I want to more and more poeple reading books .

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