正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
we fond out that more and more poeple in reading have difference opinion. In a study,we learned that reading more less than before quesion.In someone opinion ,they think reading have a choice .Frist,the reader think some books dont't have some skills aquire.second,some books aren't attract reader.The books are steam.The other think that reading should be all kinds .First,it can improve you all ability .Such as ,reading skills、writing skills、some special skills and so on.Then ,it can acquire a lot of imformation.For example ,we can leaning about Englishi news and all formous txt. In my opinon ,there are opinion is good.But I like reading all kinds books than reading have a choice.Now ,I want to more and more poeple reading books .