2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful City in China it's well known that China is enriched in tourism resoure and delicious foods.nevertheless,from my perspective,Changsha,is one of a beautiful city in all cities.Now,let's set out enjoy fantastic good views and wonderful foods. Changsha is regarded as "star city".There is no deny that changsha has woderful natual landscapes likes orange island , yuelu mountains and meixi lake .