2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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today, many people use computer to change their life, with the develop in our country , internet become one of the important tools for us. In terms of all, computer is a usefull technology, it can fast to search what we want, to solve what we confuse. but useing the computer excessively is bad to ourselves.It will waste our time, harm to our health,affect our family ties.So,we must make a balance between computer and our life.