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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Nowadays,lots of campus get more focus on ''Creating a Green Campus''.The old tree can represent campus culture and witness the school 's grow up.The more trees planed the more comfortable you feel.The green can relax our tiredness eyes,after a class you can look through the windows.You will feel cheerful wen you see the green leaves.It's often the case that when you wander a school there are lots of tree around you. At the same time, Creating a green campus is not only plant lots of trees ,but build a suitable study atmosphere.The teacher and student get along with each other.Every student have a good attitude to life and have faith in themselves.Yo feel at home in a class.Due to every student is help each other. In order to built a green campus we should take same measures.At first,as a student study hard.Second we should get along with teachers and classmates.Last but it's the most important is that respect every with a appreciate to cheat every.I believe our campus will become more and more beautiful.
