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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5735
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

It is an tendency that information is over spread anywhere we live and study.Everyday we can receive much information.It plays an strictly significant role in our life.People generally suspect that a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. So they do,so we should avoid being distracted by irrelevant information.we can finds some reasons s follows. On the one hand,much information increases our difficulties searching valuable materials;on the other hand,there is the more information,the less energy we have to pay attention on it.Fortunately,we can take some actions to address it.For example,it would be a good way that we reduce the range where the information is needed to us.Even more,we are able to improve our capacity of discriminating the key words and then focus on it fully. In a word,information,we need, is, valuable. We can't be disturbed by the oceans of the irrelevant information.

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