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there is more and more people are weaver by public dictation easily in socialty,they believe what they look and what they hear,otherwise ,they perfer to spread what they look and what they hear,that lead to incorrect gossip spread all over the worid,people can not gain correct truth,so people do not judge a matter by seening and looking personally. as a part of the socialty,how do we deal with gossip spread ab
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