单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
I have a good friend when I was a student.She has a nice girl and she likes read books.We often gone to school together and share our secrets.She smaller than me.But,she has taller than me.We mad-ed friends have three years. She has my best a friend.So,I still remember her. I hope she can't forget me.