2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Nowadays,lots of campus get more focus on ''Creating a Green Campus''.The old tree can represent campus culture and witness the school 's grown up.The more trees planed the more comfortable you feel.The green can relax our tiredness eyes,after a class you can look through the windows.You will feel cheerful when you see the green leaves.It's often the case that when you wander a school there are lots of tree around you. At the same time, Creating a green campus is not only plant lots of trees ,but build a suitable study atmosphere.Teacher and student get along with each other.Every student has a good attitude to life and have faith in themselves.You will feel at home in a class.Due to every student to help each other. In order to built a green campus we should take same measures.At first,as a student study hard is our duty.Second we should get along with teachers and classmates.Last but it's the most important is that respect people with a appreciate way.I believe our campus will become more and more beautiful.