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文中词汇表达灵活多样，学术词汇的使用还需加强；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
The life of one is short but treasure. Everyone trend to have a fruitful and significance life. However, we may have difference outlooks about this world,as a result of different way we take. As a proverb goes,the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast if. Indeed,only if we can do someting that we actually want, we could take our interest and insist.From myself,when in my university life,I addicted online and played games all days.At that time,I prefered to have a comfortable life rater than had an industrious study.I didn't realized that I have wasted so much important time and discarded some interests.But in the three semester,I found the life I took in the past is not what I need and I want to change.At last, I choose study to offset the time that i used to lose and have a comfirm belief is study can let a man become more excellent and push he stright forward. Having a fruit study life and some hobbies i actually like,now I think,are the greastest use of my life.These can remind me that the life today is hard-won and do not waste them.
