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单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
The life of one is short and wonderful. Everyone trend have a fruitful and significance life. However, we may have difference outlooks about this world,as a result of different way we select.As a proverb goes, the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. Indeed,only if we can do something that we actually want, we could take our interest and insist.From myself,when in my university life,I was addicting online and playing games all days.At that time,I prefer to have a comfortable life rater than had an industrious study.I didn't realized that I have wasted so much precious time and discarded some interests.But in the three semester,I found the life I took in the past is not what I need and I want to change.At last, I choose study to offset the time that i used to lose.I have a firm belief that study can let a man become more excellent and push he straight forward. Having a full learning experience and some hobbies i actually like,now I think,are the greatest use of my life.These can remind me that the life today is hard-won and do not waste them.
