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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；采用了一些简单的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
The way to be happy. It's obvious that people always something to satisfied their desires.But we can never be satisfied,and it's make people always fell unhappy.As a old saying：“Happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them."There is the question,how can we be happy in this fickleness society. It's known to all,that if we fell hungry we just need few food to full our stomach.But people always buy so much food which beyond their ability to deal with.It's sames that we now just paying our attention to earn money,so there are so money problems around us.Things gonna be easier if we only achieve our basic need. Disappointed come from compared,so we should confirm ourselves'position and find success made by us. Happiness come from our life,we should never be disappointed by the difficult or failure.In me the tiger sniffs the rose.Happy will never leave you alone,so we just keep our eyes on future and never be defeat by life.
可可英语 - 划词释义
