小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Hello！My neme is Zhagn Jing,I am a stutend,I have a good firend,She neme's Lily,She like swiming ,she go to the swim evrey day,she's a swimer. Lily have a big house ,Sitiing room and bed room in tihs house,The chiken next to bed room.Lily love to house,She like keep the room claen.