2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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if my friend is going to visit my hometown ,i would like to take him to see my campuses. in my opinions , this space is my studies space where taught me a lot of kownlege and made me clever.it was important for me . firstly,the campuses around the lake and trees ,i like staying at seat under the trees ,and reading book ,it felt very interested ,