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the cartoon depicts a conversation between a father and his son in which the son says 'all of my professors ...with you and mum.'obviously ,the cartoon reveals in a humorous way the importance of being indenoendent of our parents, on the one hand ,being indenpent of our parents is a sign of becoming mature.we are no longer little kids and our parents are getting order day by day,just as a baby hawk will have to leave its nest after it grows up,young people have to leave their home and become independent of their parents.it is a natural way that we grow up but it is independent that symbolizes we are mature enough.