2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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Nowadays,it is not a rare thing to be heard that many parents sent their kids to art classes.At that same time,it reads a hot discuss about should parents sent their kid to art classes. The supporters say yes becausethey think that the more art skill their kids learnd,the more chance their kids have in the furture.The supporters most are parents,of crouse,all of parents in the wrold want their kid to live better.It just like the famous saying:no pains,no gains. However,other people hold a quite different point of view.They think that kid are tried at their school classes,if they have to learn art ,they will feel stressful.The worse cause is rose,they do not well in neither school classes nor art classes. In my opinion,as a student,i agree that parents better give a freetime to their kids.Having enough time,they will do better in their works.