题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
要求
1.对这种做法有人表示支持可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,it is not a rare thing to be heard that many parents sent their kids to art classes.At the same time,it reads a hot discuss about wehther parents should sent their kid to art classes. The supporters say yes because they think that the more skill their kids learned,the more chance their kids have in the future.The supporters most are parents,of crouse,all of parents in the world want their kid to live better.It just like the famous saying:no pains,no gains. However,other people hold a quite different point of view.They think that kid are tried at their school classes,if they have to learn art,they will feel stressful.The worse influence is rose,they do not well in neither school classes nor art classes. In my opinion,as a student,i agree that parents better give a free time to their kids.Having enough time,they will do better in their works.
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