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拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Zhang Qing is a male sophomore who studies in Xi’an Technological University .He studied in Bijie city Guangzhou province in his childhood. He was admitted to Xi’an Technological University because of his remarkable grades in July 2013, and he is still studying at Materials and Chemical Engineering school. He has won numerous university awards, such as academic scholarships and sports certificates during 2013 to 2015. Moreover, his main hobbies are playing basketball, singing and traveling.
