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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第45篇:实践学习和阅读学习哪个更好些

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:27浏览次数:11490
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作文题目:

Close observation opens up new worlds in many ways. It can tell us things we would otherwise never know. Most often, we see more when we look and listen. Fortunately, movies give us that option, but is requires diligence. Compare and contrast learning by doing to learning by reading.

In your opinion, which is better? Explain.

近距离观察能够开拓视野。对比和比较实践学习和阅读学习。依你看,哪个更好些?并作出解释。

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作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用学术词汇;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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As the great poet bacon said ’Histories make men wise; poets witty; the mathematics subtle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend.’Different books broaden our horizons and concert aplenty enlightenment.However,no reading,no gains.In my view,the power of reading must be think highly of. I don’t understand why someone would rather spend the unnecessary time and effort on achieving experience what have being written in a book than seek from reading it directly.’A good book is a good friend.’When you read a good book,you just like talking with an experienced friends who can make up your shortage of nature. ’It is good to learn at another man’s cost.’When you do something that you had almost never done before,reading related books in order to facing them in the best of condition is essential.If you don’t prepared well,just rushed up to do blindly may at the cost of your lives,even the result satisfied you,the waste of the human,material and financial resources is also a pity.They are not what we were pleased to see,you have been a decrepit, old man after obtain the experience through the time consuming. The learning by doing may affects one more compared to learning by reading.Practice attach importance to practicality more.While in some subjects,we pay more attention to logic reasoning and analysis.So the learning by doing lack of a wild range of applicability. We will always admire the famous statue by Rodin entitled "The Thinker" and cannot ignore the power of static state comparing doing active, Moreover,with the quantity of reading increasing.The book you have read not only make you relax but also bring about immense inner peace and tranquility.Crack open a good book,and believe in the power of reading.

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