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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1890
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
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文中错误句子稍微偏多了;文中词汇表达较熟练丰富度不够,但请检查文章的单词拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Don't Be Afraid To Say "No" We are aften asked to do something,but we answer should be different,that is to say we should refuse others. We should say "no" when the request is so high that we cannot manage it. When the request is inlegal,we alse cannot promise him. What's more, to help those who are always refuse others is stupid. Although know the reasonal ways treating people, we often make mistakes when faced others, because we have a concern which we could lose the friendship. If we always peomise others without thinking twice, the results usually make us upset and don't know what to do next.

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