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We are often asked to do something,but we answer should be different,that is to say we should refuse others. We should say "no" when the request is so high that we cannot manage it. When the request is inlegal,we alse cannot promise him. What's more, to help those who are always refuse others is stupid. Although know the reasonal ways treating people, we often make mistakes when faced others, because we have a concern which we could lose the friendship. If we always peomise others without thinking twice, the results usually make us upset and don't know what to do next.