文章词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;句式变化较丰富,若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
We are frequently asked to do something,but we answer should be different,that is to say we should refuse others. We should say "no" when the request is so high that we cannot manage it. When the request is illegal,we also cannot promise him. What's more, to help those who are always refuse others is stupid. Although know the reasonal ways treating people, we often make mistakes when faced others, because we have a concern which we could lose the friendship. If we always peomise others without thinking twice, the results usually make us upset and don't know what to do next.