文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;句式变化较丰富,若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
We are frequently asked to do something,but we answers should be different,that is to say we should refuse others. We should say "no" when the request is so high that we cannot manage it. When the request is illegal,we also cannot promise him. What's more, to help those who refuse others all the time is stupid. Although know the reasonable ways treating people, we often make mistakes when faced others, because we have a concern which we could lose the friendship. If we always peomise others without thinking twice, the results usually make us upset and don't know what to do next.