作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
We are frequently asked to do others' something, we answers should be different,that is to say we should refuse others. We should say "no" when the request is so high that we cannot manage it. When the request is illegal,we also cannot promise him. What's more, to help those who refuse others all the time is stupid. Although knowing the reasonable ways treating people, we often make mistakes when faced others, because we have a concern which we could lose the friendship. If we always promise others without thinking twice, the results usually make us upset and don't know what to do next.