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河南柘城县2012-2013学年第一学期期末质量检测八年级英语试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 18:22浏览次数:1144[网页划词已开启]
要求:

以Do Chores为题,写一下你在家里做哪些家务,不做哪些家务,并说明理由。词80左右。

可参考下列短语:

wash the dishes,do the laundry,clean the room,sweep the floor,fold the clothes,make the bed,take out the trash,wash the car…

用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Though everyone has a warm and loving family.But there are many chores in our family.Different people do different things.I like doing the dishes,because it's relaxing.And I also like to do the laundry.Because we have automatic washing machines now.So do the laundry is very easy.And fold the clothes and make the bed are very easy too. But I don't like to take out the trash.Because they are having a strange odor.I can't stand it.Oh,yes,clean the room and sweep the floor are also very boring.So I don't like them.And wash the car is my father's favourite. How about you?

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