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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17430
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Computer and Man Nowadays computer is widely used in our daily life.We can do almost everything through it.And by using computer,we can get useful information timely.But every coins has two sides,sometime people too rely on computer so that somebody are addicted it.Such some young man can't live without computer,they play computer games or chat with their internet friends.And this finally,these young man can't pay their attention to their study or normal life. From now on,I heard lots of stories about this.So how to deal with computer is the key question.At first,we should know the advantage of computer and then we should learn to use it to help us on our study and life.The next step,we should keep a reasonable attitude on computer,we can play the games and we can chat with our friends or we watch movie on it,but we can't use it unbridled.At last,we should know computer is just a tool to make our life be more convenient. Computer makes our life get easier than before,and computer can be more and more powerful.So there is a beautiful life in front of us,and do not be addicted of computer is good to greet a better life.

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