广东汕头市2013届高三上学期期末试卷英语作文

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Last week psychology professor Kelly Lam gave a speech about the attitute to sharing among students. It said that over 30% students don't share their feelings no matter happy or sad. And this is because our education didn't let children know the significance of sharing. It is very important to learn to share with others nowadays and if we learn to share, we can have a better future.