2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Amoy is my second hometown,I lived in here without 4 years old.It is a coastal city in the south of China. Amoy is a tourist resort.Gulangyu island,a quiet and desirable island so that attract thousands of touristes.There is a place you have to go to,you can riding along Xiamen island ,you can sit on the beach ,visit the sea ,eat Xiamen snacks with beer,yes, it is Huandaolu road.