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Welcome to Chongqing China.There are lots of places of interest here.So I can' t tell you all.But there is one place that you can't miss if you are a fan of nature,the Three Gorges.It is tolally 196 kilometers from West to East.And it starts at Fengjie province where one of the three gorges Qutang gorge located in.At the gap of Qutang gorge is Kuimen,two mountains rising steeply, like portals, its narrowest point is just less than hundred meters , high mountains and swift rivers are so wonderful that you will not want to leave.In qutang gorge,there are many attractions such as moya carve and Cliffs cliff which are all very attractive.And then is the Daning River, Daning River Small Three Gorges is an important part of the Three Gorges scenery.Wu Gorge is centrally located between Wushan and Badong counties, deep valley gorge long, quiet fair. Wushan 12 peaks just like the famous Twelve slim fairy,so beautiful and full of mystery.The last is Xiling Gorge.Many famous acient Chinese poets like Libai and Du fu have writen pomes about the three gorges.The secenry is beautiful while the pomes are amazsing too.So if you've got a chance,you must go visit it and read some pomes about.
