2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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nowadays more and more people in large cities complain about their decreasing quality of life .what's more important is to find out what sort of things cause the fall and how can we deal with it. we have to admit there are plenty of reasons accounting for the fall of qulity of life .the first thing comes to mind is environment pollution,including air pollution、water pollution and so on which make people in large cities feel uncomfortable than in the smaller cities. if you live in a unclear city how can you feel happy to do any other things .health issue however is another thing we have to consider.now people in large cities may have more sickness because of the awful environment.and it is also harder to go to the hospital in large cities not to mention the expensive medical charges.last but not least,we need to give more attentions to working stress. most people do feel exhausted after work and some even have to work overtime in order to keep up the schedule. this kind of stress not only come from their boss but also from their competitive colleagues . the more important issue is the solution to increase their quality of life. firsty ,we could plant more trees and use green technologyto deal with the enviroment pollution.actually we are supposed to build up environmental awarness and try our efforts to protect the environment so that we can live a green life.secondly,in order to deal with the health issue we should cultivate a sense of health as well as do more exercises.thirdly,work is there and the only thing we should do is to learn self relief such as taking a nap for tweenty minutes or doing massages after work .and you also should tell yourself what you are doing now is to enrich your life and that worth it. all in all,increasing the quality of life in large cities is a long-term project and should deal with it with many aspects including environment pollution , health issue , working stress and so on .only when we try our best to change our attitude ,can we live a healthy and high-quality life.