题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On maintaining trust With the development of society ,phenomenon of cheat become more and more popular .As a result ,trust is more and more important ,there are many reasons for explain for that. On the one hand, trust make our society more harmony that people can receive others help unworriedly.