2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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First of all ,I am very glad to you can go to visit my hometown.On the one hand ,I will introduce some cultural heritage to you ,such as ZhengLong town,has history of 2000 years,and it famous for its old and some culture .On the other hand ,the forest park of Maoming is a good place ,there are some games ,and many people will go there to relax .Of course ,