2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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First of all ,I am very glad for you that you can go to visit my hometown.On the one hand ,I will visit some cultural heritage with you ,such as ZhengLong town,which is a special town with 2000 years history,and it famous for its old and culture .On the other hand ,the forest park of Maoming is a good place ,there are some games ,and that is why some children in favor of there , many people will go there because its beatuy.Of course ,in my hometown ,not onlyi these interestingplace,i look forward for your coming ,when you arrive