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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11363[网页划词已开启]
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

With the rapid development of the economic,Cell phone became more and more popular in our life .Therefore,cell phone also influences our life also ,for example,people are crossing the street looking their cell phone and using walking sticking in order to see. Even it makes life more interesting and the word more small.However,when we addicted in play cell pone,we may loss life .One the one hand,when addicted comminication by phone ,we have no time to communicate with my family .Now ,some young people looking at thier phone at home,and do not communicate with their parents and friends.On the otherrhand,some students addicted it in class,they think phone help them understand who they are ,and they can do for other.what worse,it brought many problems in life. So,we should learn hou to use phone reasonably.

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