从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling Obviously,in today'China ,many students take notice of their English,but in fact they just pay attention on their English instead of their spelling.And however this phemonone become more and more serious,what is the cause of this situation ,there are some reason follow us .firstly ,the ecducation is a important factor in China.secondly, most of students are supportive of the views,that as long as we can speak english rather than spell. On my opinion,if we want to change it ,first of all ,wo should change from the education,