拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling Obviously,in today'China,many students take notice of their English,but in fact they just pay attention on their English instead of their spelling.And however,this phenomenon become more and more serious,what is the cause of this situation,there are some reasons follow us.Firstly,the education is a important factor in China.Secondly, most of students are supportive of the views,that as long as we can speak english rather than spell. On my opinion,if we want to change it.First of all ,we should change from the education,for instance ,we should let them realize the importance of spelling.