能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
nowadays, the life's rhythm getting more and more faster.people seems have no time to figure out whether is true or false . it's so sad.we can see ,many lies appear on network, nobody want to get the truth ,the only thing they do ,it's complain.Nobody concern the truth ,people are so easy to be angry .As mankind, we can think the complex questions, why we be so easy.it's not wisdom to get a conclusion quikly. we should use our brain to think ,to seek the truth ,to clarify the lie.
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