托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

句式变化多样；词汇表达用的较丰富，另外请检查文章的单词拼写；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Many people would like to live n rural area, because somd rural area's advantage: the air is fresh, the drinking water is clean which is little influenced by pollution, and what's more you can own a garden to plant vegetables and flowers, which make rural area is comfortable place for living. However, it doesn't means that living in rural area is better than living around a lot of people, that may be the reason why the number of people in city is greater than the number in rural area. It is pbviously that living around a lot of people has some comparative priorities. First, living around a lot of people will give people some safe sense, and people will feel less lonely compared with living in rural area.On one hand, it is not diffcult to discern that many bad guys prefer to break rules of our society in rural area, so rural area is more dangerous than the place where a large number of people live. On the other hand, You have more opportunities to make more friends, and they will comfort you when you are down, they will lend you a hand when you get into trouble. Second, the public equipment in rural area is worse than in people clustered place, such as town, city. Because in rural area, the population is smaller, it is unrealistic for government to invest the same money in public equipment as invest in city. So when you drive to some rural area, you always notice the absent of public equipment such as phiscal equipment which is used as tool for people to keep healthy. In addtion, rural area is lack of genius. When many people get together the probability that there are some briliant guys is increased. So, we can easily find that some famous doctor stayed in city rather than rural area. When you are diagnosed to serious disease, it is neccesary to find a skillful doctor to cure you. However, it is so hard in rural area. In conclusion, even though rural area has some attractive sides, but many people would like to live in city. the reason for that may be that city is more convienent than rural area.