小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much. I piayed with she when I was ten.Now,we are grow up,but I still remember she.