文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
About Major Specialty Everybody know if they want to go college, they must to choose major specialty. About major specialty that is ten years ago. Now, I can give you a piece of advice that you'd better choose EHS engineer. Because it is a important specialty and skill, all the company need this skill. Especially, government request these company or factory to manage EHS system. So these boss must to employ an EHS engineer. This is my suggestion. This specialty is very important, so if you will choose it, you will have to prepare for it. You will study a lot of specialty book. For example, environment, safety, health and so on. And you must to remember policy and laws of government. If you know these standard, you are a EHS expert. I think that a lot of company will employ you. If you know English, you will high income. So, I want you to choose EHS engineer specialty.