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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(94):Top Meal of the Day

发布时间:2015-04-30 10:29浏览次数:504
要求:
阅读下面的文字,用英语写一篇120-150词的短文。最近的一项研究表明,北京大约50%的青少年有不吃早餐的习惯。请根据表格的内容用英语写一篇题为“Top Meal of the Day”的短文。
原因
晚上学习太晚,不吃早餐可多睡一会。家长太忙无暇顾及,给钱让孩子自己解决。
一些女孩为保持苗条身材常不吃早餐。
结果
课上整天想睡觉。注意力下降。考试成绩不理想。
建议
早餐不可少,它提供全天所需能量的30%。而且有助于创造性思维。青少年健康应从早餐
抓起。
注意:1.短文必须包括所有要点,可以适当增加情节,使内容连贯。
2.词数:100左右3.参考词汇:苗条的:slim创造性的:creative
用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Top Meal of the Day A recent study shows that about 50% teenagers have the habit of having no breakfast in Beijing. There are several reasons to explain the phenomenon. For one thing, they can have more time to sleep in the morning since they have stayed up so late at night.For another thing, parents are too busy to take care of their children, so they let children buy breakfast by giving money. In addition, some girls usually don't have breakfast for the purpose of keeping slim. However, having no breakfast can result in bad effects,such as, feeling sleepy in class all day, reducing attention in class, getting unqualified scores. This problem has to be solved. Here are some suggestions. Have breakfast everyday since it offers 30% energy of the whole days' need and it attributes to creative mind. Therefore, teenagers should change the habits from breakfast.

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