简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇,不过拼写错误比较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
People always believe that seeing from their eyes is truth,nonthless,the couclusion after a suvery through eyes proablys distort the truth of things. In modern time,most of people are so casual that they draw a conlusion only scan in a minutes.They choose things focus on its brand rather than its quality,they cherish handsome boys and beautful girls instead of viture of individuals.Your eyes and heart concieve you for a long time. However,we can observe not only external things but also internal of it.Most of things have outstanding forms but infavorable compose in act such as many ads.What should we tell them ?beleive it or not ,so life is.More excellent things is ,more careful you are.In a word,which need our reasonable and ration mature towards scenes of life.
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