拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My View on University Ranking Nowadays,there are plenty of universities like to make a ranking.This is willing to rank major of schools from top to botton.Just like a list,and the universities which are on the list compare with others,so that people can know these universities level of education. As the list following,some people think people will always pay too much attention to the ranking,whereas ignore universities real powerful on education.It can make the schools develop imbalanced.However,also have a large sum of people against the view.They think the ranking can help people who are not see schools clearly.The ranking is a useful data to inspire universities improved their standard of education. In my opinion,the ranking has two sides about universities.For the good one,it is a vital thing to let us choose the school which is suitable for us.But for another,if we only concentrate on the ranking,we will lose some schools which prefer to have a good educational capability rather than a rank.Above all,the ranking just as a data supply some messages to us.Don't let it become a key for your choice.
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