2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

The way to success Anyone wants to success,but how to do it?It's a vital keys which way do you choose to be successful. In the past,the major of people would like to success using some ways that need to spend time on preparing rather than doing,though it always make people success slowly,people have a good jenior to help them possess a better successful. However,when time goes by,people have a larger pressure than the last.Nowadays,people who wants to successful should take more knowledge and capabilities enough.More and more quickly life make people want to success spend less time than before they want to success without any way. Just like Abraham Lincoln's remark "give me six hours to chop down a tree,and i will spend the first four sharpening the axe".The prepare of success is a important thing to accumulate experiences so that people can have a more sensitive vision to choice.Successful like a cup,and prepare like water in the cup,it's the most way to success,wihout a enough preparing,people can not finish troubles in the way to success,and of course can not take the apple of successful tree.